So hey guys, I know I know, I didn't take long for me to post this time. Well that's because I'm only telling you about a short novella.
This tiny little novella started off good. Great even. But then I think before she meets Trey there should have been a little more to it and a little more description to the characters. It just felt like the whole novella was just based on just the sex scenes. It was good, but could have been better. Also, I think it's pretty cheesy, because you don't just say or think things like that on a first date. There's always more time. I kind of felt like the emotions of the characters were too in depth or too empty I guess.
Oh and one more thing. How can someone be a 'Virgin sex addict'? It's either your a virgin or not. You've had sex your not a virgin, didn't have sex, not a virgin. But a 'Virgin sex addict' is just too... unreal.
Thanks for reading and remember,
I LOVE YOU,
Bee
P.s. I love you. Stay strong soldiers!
This tiny little novella started off good. Great even. But then I think before she meets Trey there should have been a little more to it and a little more description to the characters. It just felt like the whole novella was just based on just the sex scenes. It was good, but could have been better. Also, I think it's pretty cheesy, because you don't just say or think things like that on a first date. There's always more time. I kind of felt like the emotions of the characters were too in depth or too empty I guess.
Oh and one more thing. How can someone be a 'Virgin sex addict'? It's either your a virgin or not. You've had sex your not a virgin, didn't have sex, not a virgin. But a 'Virgin sex addict' is just too... unreal.
Thanks for reading and remember,
I LOVE YOU,
Bee
P.s. I love you. Stay strong soldiers!